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A Never Ending Fire
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:40:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A Never Ending Fire
burns deep inside of me
The mere touch of you hand
brings it up a few degrees
With every passionate kiss
it reaches a brighter glow
When we are making love
there is no higher plateau
A valcano errupts inside of us
love pouring, like the lava does
We both have exotic feelings
like there never was
This Never Ending Fire
gets brighter everyday
How lucky we both are
that love has found its way
Into our minds, our hearts
our bodies and our souls
The love we have for each other
is real and has no holes
This Never Ending Fire
will go on forever and never die
For in each day of our lives
it has reached a brand new high
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-08-28 22:40:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Never Ending Fire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:54:46 PM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful write, Bruce. You are both very lucky to have this love.
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Re: A Never Ending Fire
(User Rating: 1 ) by positivelypurple on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:55:38 AM AEST (User
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Very nice write! |
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Re: A Never Ending Fire
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:35:32 AM AEST (User
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Oh Bruce, U go now!
flammy fire ya got going there.
Great write..
Smiles, huggs, luvs,
emy |
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Re: A Never Ending Fire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:39:37 AM AEST (User
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Ahhh...The Prince of Romance strikes again...
Great job..
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Re: A Never Ending Fire
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:34:45 AM AEST (User
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beautifully passionate and romantic:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Never Ending Fire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stew on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:35:37 PM AEST (User
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i really like this poem. i wish there was someone to share my never ending fire with. i just found out that my boyfriend was doing my best friend! so i hope my life will somehow get better.
love forever
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Re: A Never Ending Fire
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:39:06 PM AEST (User
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So romantic and a very beautiful poem
You are both very lucky to share this love
May you both be blessed with happiness always
Love sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: A Never Ending Fire
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:12:06 PM AEST (User
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another steam filled night of romance very beautiful poem
Michelle |
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