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Building my life
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:52:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A new car in hand
A job about to start
To build a new future
For a new chapter soon to unfold
Save up my money for still not enough
Plan now for my next step after school
To build a new future
For a new chapter soon to unfold
A fear of failure passes day in and out
Afraid to let go, also what lays untold
To build a new future
For a new chapter soon to unfold
I keep my head up for some reasons why
My guidence with my dad pushing me, I know he will always love me
My decision to move, my mom sad, but continuous support
My ambition to start, my loved one I love, Your everything to me
Its started already theres no turning back
Done with the past its time to continue on
To build a new future
For a new chapter soon to unfold
Copyright ©
heartfilledblood
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2004-08-28 21:52:54]
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Re: Building my life
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by shorty_52 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:02:29 PM AEST
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hey babe. this is really good. he he i feel special i'm in it.:D:D:D:Dbut ya this is really good. i really liked it. keep up the good work. babe. i love u and i can't wait to see u again.
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Re: Building my life
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:04:48 PM AEST
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Keep your chin up, shoulders back and always remember to be true to yourself. This is the start of the rest of your life. It will be exciting and challenging at the same time. Just remember to always think before you act.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Building my life
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:42:19 PM AEST
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i am only a sophomore in highschool, and ive thought about this a lot. goodluck with your new chapters of life.
great write btw =] |
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Re: Building my life
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:55:15 PM AEST
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well written... may all your dreams and wishes come true:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Building my life
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:36:57 AM AEST
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excelllent poem, may your future endevours be all that you hoped for. good luck as you venture out to make your dreams come true.
Take Care Always
Kindragon |
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