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y fall in love
Contributed by
bobose
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:45:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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y fall in love
wat is the point
to get hurt
to feel ashamed
wat is the point
im tired of havin to fell a certain way
puttin all my time in to one person
then they let me down
so answer me this
why fall in love
ur frend
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2004-08-28 21:45:54]
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Re: y fall in love
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:49:48 PM AEST
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| i feel the same about life. good write. |
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Re: y fall in love
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by shorty_52 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:54:10 PM AEST
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i don't feel like answering u.:D jk. so ur life is better, sumtimes, even if it makes it feel worse at times as well. so in other words. i'm not sure. i could say more but i won't. i'll spare u it and just tell u next time i talk to u on the phone.
good poem tey. keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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Re: y fall in love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:42:29 AM AEST
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Real love, or "true love" is not like that. Your just wasting your time with the wrong guys. Your poetry would be really good if you would not take shortcuts with your wording.
Rita |
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Re: y fall in love
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by Jenn2004 on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 02:48:56 PM AEST
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| Im starting to feel the same way too. |
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