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Nothing
Contributed by
xRotten_Insidex
on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:39:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dark clouds rise above me all the time now
All these things picking at me
tearing me apart mentally and physically
You may not see it but inside I am weeping
The burning fire that I was once inside me is now going dim and is dying
My eyes are now blinded by darkness and fog
All my senses are being ripped off
with everything I've heard felt and seen
Im becoming everyones sweet nothing now
I am losing everything that once ever gave me hope or happiness
Everything is being takin away from me ....
My friends, family, everything and everyone
Theres really nothing left for me anymore
All my dreams and goals seem impossible to reach now
Its now like trying to pick a star out of the sky
I falling on my knees now ripping my heart out
Tears keep rushing down
How could all of this happen...
Whats wrong with me...
Everythings hopeless
I am just a mere sweet nothing caught in this tangled web I've weaved
Copyright ©
xRotten_Insidex
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2004-08-28 21:39:25]
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Re: Nothing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:52:40 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional write, very well written. |
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Re: Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:54:21 PM AEST
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| Hey, you did a really good Job on that poem, its very deep, I know how you feel, ! and i love your poem! GOOD JOB ! okay bye |
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Re: Nothing
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by positivelypurple on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:03:30 AM AEST
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| Very emotional and sad write...nicely done...hang in there! |
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