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Decieving Love

Contributed by Yumi_san on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 08:46:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Heart beating fast,
palms sweating slowly.
Looking at you,
wondering how long it will last.

Deep in thought,
Deep in love.
Wondering if its worth it,
getting caught.

Eyes to eyes,
lips to lips.
picking you..
out of all the guys.

Cheating,
Lying.
My other guy,
angry face red and body heating

No regret,
no love for him.
You are the one,
I love tonight......

Copyright © Yumi_san ... [ 2004-08-28 20:46:04]
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Re: Decieving Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:33:13 AM AEST
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This is far better than your other two poems. Short and to the point, and it elucidates the rush of adrenaline when risking all upon deceit.

I like the lines;

"Eyes to eyes,
lips to lips.
picking you..
out of all the guys."

I haven't seen 'eyes' and 'guys' rhymed before. I appreciate its originality. You also express mixed feelings, attributing a violent nature towards your boyfriend, giving you some justification for taking the risk ...

Anyway - I like this poem, and hope that the risk you took was worth it.

Thanks for sharing.

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