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A Simple Suicide
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 08:30:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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roasting on my own self pity
feel my soul cook
drinking in each drop of hatered
all of your amusement
comes from me
when i sit in my corner
rocking back and forth
crying tears of blood
with this knife that i do hold
cutting up my arm
my work is done
as it drops to the floor
in a pool of crimson light
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-08-28 20:30:05]
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Re: A Simple Suicide
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:04:47 PM AEST
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| the title reminded me of one of mine, simplistic suicide. yours got your point across very well. fantastic write. |
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Re: A Simple Suicide
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by veramouse on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:20:16 PM AEST
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there seems to be a lot of suicide poems lately...it does worry me, but, maybe, i am missing the point.
Vera |
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