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the start of the day is not a good sight
Contributed by
goofyone
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 08:15:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The start of the day is not a good sight
You see that dragon has put up such a good fight
He comes to see you most ever night
He makes you hurt and stay in such pain
You start your day at the edge of the bed
Tears fall from your eyes just like the rain
No one knows how much pain your in.
Just trying to get dressed is such a pain
Simple things like putting on your paint
Your legs are weak and they start to jerk
But you keep on trying cause you have to work
Some of you friends they just look and stare
They just don’t know or understand what’s wrong with you
Some days you just stop and think
God this is more than I can take
Just stop for an hour or maybe a day
Please dear god make it go away
goofyone
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Re: the start of the day is not a good sight
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by buchi on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 07:33:54 PM AEST
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| A beautiful poem indeed..A single thought pervades and gives unity to the piece |
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Re: the start of the day is not a good sight
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by DanishPoet on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 07:48:54 AM AEST
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Indeed. No one can tell the pain some is living in.
Is there a word for a beautiful desription of something like a living hell? That might be the word to this poem. |
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