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Memorized Ceiling
Contributed by
tatharel
on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 06:23:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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So here you are again
Staring up at your memorized ceiling
Having no thoughts left to think
But to dwell on your meaningless life
Copyright ©
tatharel
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2004-08-28 18:23:11]
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Re: Memorized Ceiling
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:41:01 PM AEST
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seems like an okay title that gets peoples attentions because they are curious. i would personally use meaningless life or change it to meaningless existence.
short and powerful poem, ive been thinking a lot on this lately. keep up the great work. =] |
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Re: Memorized Ceiling
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:54:00 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Memorized Ceiling
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:29:51 AM AEST
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great poem, complete in itself, i am familiar with my ceiling as well, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Memorized Ceiling
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by Archie on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 08:01:01 PM AEST
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| I think you did a good job on this poem. |
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