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Control Freak!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 05:36:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She told me I mustn’t dress like I do,
Because SHE SAYS that I look screwed.
She said the music I listen to,
Is crap, real towney sh**.
She said if I want to ever get drunk,
I need to mix spirits.
When she constantly tells me drinking is wrong.
Well she’s just a hypocrite!
I listen to rock!
And some proper dark stuff.
Man, where does she get off?
But if I DID listen to pop.
And shop in towney shops,
Why should the world stop???
She went through what bands I’m ALLOWED to like.
She won’t control me! I make up my own mind!
She sucks up for money,
So she can go pilling.
She drives me up the wall,
‘Coz she’s so careless to how I’m feeling.
She’s dating 3 different boys,
Treating each one like a toy.
All she ever spits out is noise.
Gob, gob, gob and voice!
But the worst part’s, when she’s stoned.
And refusing, to go home.
She pills on LSD!
And it’s a real sad sight for me.
Nothing gets through to her head.
She drinks, drugs, and cuts… And often wants to be dead.
She tells me I should pill,
She says it makes your head heal.
But her lows prove it all.
NOTHING! Is worth the fall…
But she won’t listen to a word from me.
She tells me how to live, she’s a control freak!
She won’t change, who is she?
GUESS WHAT! It’s ZOE!!!
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2004-08-28 17:36:11]
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Re: Control Freak!
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 05:46:47 PM AEST
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| I would love to hear this read aloud. Great write.--Mothy |
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Re: Control Freak!
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by snowflake on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 11:21:51 PM AEST
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I think this is A great write I'm glad you act as yourself and not try to fit in i once had to learn that I love this alot though keep up the good work!!!
*-*~SnoWflAkE~*-* |
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