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One Day
Contributed by
oreo_kisses
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 04:46:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I sit here
Full of hope
Hope that I might
Stand a chance one day
That I might
Be more than
Just a friend
That I might
Mean something
To someone
Someone
Like you
The one
That I admire
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2004-08-28 16:46:05]
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Re: One Day
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by MomentInTime on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:08:49 PM AEST
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Well, I think that looking in the mirror and appreciating the reflection is a positive step in the right direction.
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Re: One Day
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 08:26:52 PM AEST
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When I look at the structure of your poem, it looks like the image of a person standing and looking back at me. A pleasant messsge
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