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The Crazed
Contributed by
DeathByLove
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 03:51:20 PM in AEST
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psychoticpoems
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The blood red drops are filling her tearing eyes
You and her know she has done wrong
You can see it, see it on the back of her lowering head
CUTS cuts so deep you want to leave
Leave her to move on just like everybody else in this damn world except for.....
This Girl
This girl who stalks you while your sleeping,driving into people, picking rocks to throw
You pull out a shotgun it makes a loud painful scream.
Then it's over your in orange and pulling the rapist off...
This Girl
This girl who still haunts you with those hollowed eyes
This girl who made you move up to a white jacket in a bubbled room
She's smiling now this hollowed eyed girl
For docters say she was never there
Only when..........
YOU KILLED
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DeathByLove
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2004-08-28 15:51:20]
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Re: The Crazed
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by Stoney1 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 04:19:57 PM AEST
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| We won't. |
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Re: The Crazed
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 04:25:03 PM AEST
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| some nice phrases in here. The form seemed to me to be effective. All in all, very interesting. --Mothy |
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Re: The Crazed
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by thumper on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 09:41:33 AM AEST
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WOW! Talk about split personality! Very effective poem. Speaks to me of needing someone, but no one's there. Just my take on it. Peace to you.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: The Crazed
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by Ninnyfarfar on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 09:03:46 AM AEST
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awesome!
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