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Watcher's Diary
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 03:09:04 PM in AEST
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( I have no idea where this "voice" came from )
Mankind shall surely die
It is inevitable
I have seen it before
I shall see it again
The benevolent Mother
In all her phazes
As a Child, receptive
She knows no better
Than to share with innocence
Eagerly seeking approval
To Please
As a Maiden, willing
Opening herself up
Seeking the tender touch
Of an attentive lover
To pleasure
As The Crone, bitter
Falling in upon herself
Withdrawn, refexively
Ridding herself of refuse
In preservation
She shudders and shakes
Twitching at the surface
Trying to remove her parasites
She coughs and sneezes
Expelling their poisons
She cries acidic tears of sorrow
For days on end
She peels back her layers
Burns her skin with her insides
Irrigates her wounds
Then freeze dries for ages
Life, all life
Is extinguished
She lies dormant
Rejuvenating
Healing from the abusive
Treatment of her tormentors
As with the Dinosaurs
So too, treads Man
I have witnessed it
Many times
I am a Watcher
One of the last of my kind
We are
The true historians
Recorders of Her life
Blessed Be Our Mother
Earth
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2004-08-28 15:09:04]
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 03:53:30 PM AEST
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| Sometimes I have expectations of what I am about to read on this site, I like to see things like this which are very interesting and speak to the imagination. Groovy. --the Moth |
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 03:59:41 PM AEST
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very interesting, an eternal gaurdian type spirit..... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by Sweetheart on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 04:18:47 PM AEST
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| Very unique. It reminds me of God being the historian. Our Earth is beautiful and I hate to see it falling apart by man. |
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:57:18 PM AEST
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Unique, realistic, and written in great style. I have truly enjoyed this.
Rita |
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by FleurdeSang on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 02:07:18 PM AEST
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You speak the truth, dearest Naz! Your words reverberated through me and reached my soul, caressing it with soft hands... A beautiful, yet utterly honest and sad truth of how we treat our Mother Earth. Incredible write! It made me percieve this world much differently. The flow and the description of this piece is... I seem to have no words but perfect. And such are all of your works, ami! May your words be remembered forever! Thank you so much for sharing this gorgeous masterpiece. Your words always seem to paint a clear picture in my mind, and I enjoy that very much! Many thanks once more, and all my love!
Your devoted fan and friend,
Fleur |
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:10:15 AM AEST
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I was intrigued Naz.....and then just before the end.......I recognized through mankind what it was you meant!
Bless Our Mother Earth......she has replenished herself through all the abuse and filth.....how much longer can she survive unless she is helped.
Creations around her are dying fast. Many already extinct and gone.......Please Bless her much....before everything including man is longer able to live upon her!
Wonderful, very insightful!
ConSue |
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:02:26 AM AEST
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this is so different an excellent piece.
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:26:08 PM AEST
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Jordan~speaker of truth~beholder of a light that shines forth for all to behold. I grasp the light you emit and carry it into a warm soft-shelled place in my heart. Thank you for relaying a message to the world, that WE ALL NEED TO HEAR!!! Excellent write!
Angel always...joni |
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by critterhideaway on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 08:37:56 PM AEST
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| How good this is, thank you for the tribute to mother earth, she does survive somehow in spite of man kind |
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:50:10 PM AEST
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Interestingly "channeled" poem. It's a beautiful metaphor and I -had- read it several times before commenting.
Eagerly awaiting the next entry... |
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:56:18 PM AEST
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I see where you'd be looking for permission.
I like the overall tone of this work (i've not read the others yet) and I feel its entirely in the xylem of Brown Paper Bag.
Its a take on a concept that's encompassing and refreshing.
Well done. |
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by pixie on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:25:54 AM AEST
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wow that was unlike nothing I've ever read, brilliant and unique
pixie xx *huggies* |
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Re: Watcher's Diary
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by Kratur on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:33:41 AM AEST
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| hopefully earth will love mankind so much that it swallows him up |
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