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Welcoming The Uninvited
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 02:11:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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small and insignificent
holding back the magnificent
you have now become our strength
humbleness has brought you depth
you were always sitting outside
and you must be hurting inside
you never once complained aloud
holding strong quietly to mock the proud
begotten truths have compelled you
hypocrites and priests have damned you
leaving out all of their gory details
they make you martyrs, but called you suicidals
do not fight back children of few
no matter what, they wont accept you
final moments always continue to start
dont lose faith of whats in your heart
try to end what never started
never leave from the departed
arguments of wrong and right
show them please the true light
they hold close to cival humanity
only to themselves they show gratuity
and in the endless field of flowers
your soul is noticed in tears of showers
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abnormalpunk
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2004-08-28 14:11:28]
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Re: Welcoming The Uninvited
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by Flipped_out on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 02:38:56 PM AEST
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Wow dark indeed, can they invent a deeper shade of black?...still you write well, ...and have left a mark
thankyou for sharing
kelly x
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Re: Welcoming The Uninvited
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 05:15:20 PM AEST
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| this poem is so stereotypically "emo"... a tip for next time... be more original... this write had no umph... i was bored through the whole thing..... (sound familiar? How does it feel. Tact and a little human kindess would be nice when you comment to others). |
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Re: Welcoming The Uninvited
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:13:50 PM AEST
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| excellent poem. really nice. |
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Re: Welcoming The Uninvited
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by katyqueen35 on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:09:16 AM AEST
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| Yikes. |
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