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Looking At You
Contributed by
ESweetie711
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:34:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Looking at you would be heaven's dream come true,
I have to say that I really care about you,
The way you talk, and the way you are,
They serve as indications that you are that bright shining star.
Looking at the night sky, I see your lovely face,
Oh to give you just one big hug and feel your sweet embrace,
What an awesome thing that would be,
You and me hugging in another zone as though we are free.
Looking into your eyes and their gentle soft gaze,
You make me feel like I am not here as in a daze,
Your gentle face how sweet the touch,
To know that you, my love, could care so much.
Looking to the future, and all that it can bring,
I am hoping your love will be a sure thing,
You are kind, and intriguing, and that makes me draw closer,
Looking to the future, I hope that you too can see me and you together.
Copyright by Elisha on August 28th, 2004
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ESweetie711
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2004-08-28 13:34:42]
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Re: Looking At You
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:36:32 PM AEST
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| what a lovely upbeat poem - I think you have wrote some wonderful lines that anyone in love can relate to! superb |
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Re: Looking At You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 10:46:34 AM AEST
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| very sweet and touching |
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