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Mornings
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:38:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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God I hate
these mornings alone
no one to talk with
no jokes to laugh at
now that hes gone
my chest feels empty
'cause nobody wante so be around me
for some reason or another
and whis world is so confusing
and I can't see what's going on
its all dark
except for your face
shining before me
what I can remember of it
......its been so long now
since I saw you
and hugged you
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kailadragon
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2004-08-28 12:38:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mornings
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:18:53 PM AEST (User
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powerful write. |
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Re: Mornings
(User Rating: 1 ) by Solmyr1404 on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 11:27:59 PM AEST (User
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its killing me as well....i was tellin my stepmom about it the other day, about how much i missed you, and how much i realized the daily morning hug meant to me....
it was the only reason for me to look forward to school, cause i knew i was failing that one class....
i have no reason to look forward to school up here...but ill always remember you....and ill be back to see you first chance i get....
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Re: Mornings
(User Rating: 1 ) by jeannoh on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:46:14 AM AEST (User
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I liked this poem
clearly says what
you meant
that you hate mornings
thanks for sharing
Jeannoh |
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