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My Fears Come Out To Play
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:22:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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You watch my fears come out to play,
Why can’t you help keep them at bay,
I thought that you loved me deep,
Then why of why does my heart still weep?
I feel like I’m piggy in the middle,
Surrounded & trapped in this cruel riddle,
My fears don’t ever play fair,
They sneak up behind so I don’t know who’s there.
I am filled with doubt, fear & insecurity,
Something has stolen this love’s purity,
Sitting here alone as darkness falls,
Captivated by sadness’ towering walls.
I don’t want to play this game anymore,
But I can’t seem to prise open the door,
It is firmly locked never to be opened,
Someone please help this girl who is broken.
I hear the taunts spoken from fear,
The pathway in my mind is far from clear,
I need to run far away & hide,
Before I truly die from the inside.
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pixie
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Re: My Fears Come Out To Play
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by Flipped_out on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:53:25 PM AEST
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Pixie, this is beautiful, brought a lump to my throat, very very sad, well written and moving
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Re: My Fears Come Out To Play
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:07:22 PM AEST
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Lovely and so sad...I especially loved the 3rd verse.... I wish you well...
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Re: My Fears Come Out To Play
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:39:53 PM AEST
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Dear little Pixie girl.
Please don't run and hide.....for you take all those fears with you that you have inside.
Carry on with your previous plan for your life....you need help to understand from another source.......and then you'll be able to put your fears on another course!
My how well written the poem is!
You have so much talent.......and I'd suggest that you take your poem to the person that will help.....they can see how.......after reading your poetry.
Sad, and very emotional write
Poetic hugs with warm love
consue |
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Re: My Fears Come Out To Play
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by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 03:33:21 PM AEST
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And the wise one once said...do not cast your pearls among swine....for love to fear is sad indeed, what we seek in ourselves should be what we seek in someone else.
Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: My Fears Come Out To Play
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by bernard on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 06:39:29 AM AEST
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| Pixie I have read your poem and it appears that you have a slight touch of depression. If your love makes you to have fears then look further for some-one that will love you for your own sake. It might be some-one that you know but have never given another thought. think about it and try to keep smiling. hugs from bernard. |
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Re: My Fears Come Out To Play
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 06:54:35 AM AEST
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superb in its sadness, very well done.
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Re: My Fears Come Out To Play
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by RhythmBndt on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:07:50 AM AEST
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| Gorgeous :) |
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Re: My Fears Come Out To Play
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:09:03 AM AEST
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Oh, Pix.... this is so obviously from from your heart that it tugs at mine.
I've alway heard it put as "monkey in the middle". But whether piggy or monkey.... I know the feeling. I have been caught between 'him' and fear before... I'll say only this - listen to your heart, it will tell you which direction to go in. Turning to face your fears seems scary, but it isn't as hard as it seems. You're stronger than you know... we all are... Sometimes it's necessary to face your fears - it's hard but there's usually something wonderful on the other side of them.
Hugs and wishes for your happiness,
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Re: My Fears Come Out To Play
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:24:33 AM AEST
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very sad..... hopefully this is a captured creative moment in time that reveals the feelings all humans have at one point in their lives; but if you think its more, maybe you should rethink your love, goals, wants, needs and desires... much love, and big hugs, nessa
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Re: My Fears Come Out To Play
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:47:26 AM AEST
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Another interesting write. The last line is my favorite.
Stitch |
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