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Unknown Savior
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 11:45:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As feelings of darkness
engulf my soul
I find but one who can save me
from my twisted world
Night after night
tormented by my own lies
my only chance of redemption
falls not in my eyes
You submit my anger
now transformed into bliss
My sorrows flee
with one sweet kiss
my head now bowed
my presence alone
I give you my hand
as you lead me to the unknown
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2004-08-28 11:45:42]
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Re: Unknown Savior
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by Flipped_out on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 11:53:59 AM AEST
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| Awesome!!! |
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Re: Unknown Savior
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:13:02 PM AEST
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| An elegant and quite obscure sounding masterpiece. Amazing! |
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Re: Unknown Savior
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:26:57 PM AEST
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| amazing write. |
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