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Mental Breakdown
Contributed by
AdamChantell
on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:49:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I am all alone lord,
I am tired of being ignored,
Now all i got is this knife,
I wonder what it is going to be like in the after-life.
I am just too tired of all this now,
I have commited all the sins that you would allow,
But the next one i am about to commit is going to make you frown.
All my life i have been "struggling in water" but now its time to "drown".
No longer going to take this pain,
You know it was starting to make me insane,
I have done all i can to restrain,
But everything i have done has been in vain...
It's sad when you dream of your demise,
Friends and family will be surprised,
When they all start to realize,
Me being gone will open their eyes...
Copyright ©
AdamChantell
... [
2004-08-28 00:49:10]
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Re: Mental Breakdown
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:11:14 AM AEST
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Damn I know this all to well...being alone...not cared for...it's horrible....
great poem
please comment on my work too
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Re: Mental Breakdown
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 02:13:10 AM AEST
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i too know this feeling....great job expressing it
Lots of Love
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Re: Mental Breakdown
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by x_midnight_x on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 05:07:38 AM AEST
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| your poem is beautiful and full of the sorrow so many of us feel as we go down our path in life..be strong your full of talent and stronger than you think...i feel better for reading your words...may our sometimes seemingly thankless lord thank you x |
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