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Random Haiku's
Contributed by
theraven
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:45:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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-exterminator-
Ants marching inside
Shiny steel reveals flesh
As the ants march on
-longing-
Hearing your sweet voice
Glancing hopelessly at you
I keep on dreaming
-untitled-
Feeling the darkness
Soaked in sheets of bleeding red
Death smiles upon me
The Raven
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2004-08-28 00:45:04]
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Re: Random Haiku's
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by silverjade on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 02:15:18 PM AEST
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| the last one is very intense i like it alot, keep up the good write ; ) |
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Re: Random Haiku's
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:46:46 PM AEST
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It isn't really technically a haiku if it isn't about nature..
at least that's what I was told when I was beginning.
http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/#whatishaiku
I found this link..it might help you; it stretches the rules more then when I was learning..it helped me a lot. |
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