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Only Mine
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:04:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can’t stop thinking of you, and its tearing me apart
I’m trying to pick up all the pieces of my broken heart
I broke your heart and then I broke my own
Now I am left here standing all alone
All I want is to have you the way I did before
Tell me that you love me and that you don’t need anything more
I’ll give you my body and my heart and soul too
Just give me your love, that’s all you have to do
Save me from myself, don’t let me slip away
I’m dying and I’m scared, but without you I won’t live another day
Take me back to that special place
The place you took me when I looked into you face
I go there now but no one else is there
I’m standing there all alone and you don’t even care
I’m sorry for what I did to you, I don’t know what else to say
And believe me everyday I try to wish it away
I need you back I know that’s not what you want to hear
But I don’t know where I’m going without you, and that I truly fear
If you were in my life again, I know I would be fine
Just to know that once again you were only mine
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2004-08-28 00:04:38]
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Re: Only Mine
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:36:33 AM AEST
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| this is a hard one to comment on. on the one hand i think you should move on, persevere through this. but..... maybe just maybe you could have this person back in your life. show this special someone how genuine and sincere you are. hope all goes well |
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Re: Only Mine
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by AdamChantell on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:41:08 AM AEST
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i have felt this way but just different genders. all i can say is to take the pain away,
look for a brighter day,
things will be ok,
but then again that is just what they say....
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Re: Only Mine
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 05:41:44 AM AEST
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great write. Its hard when things like this happen, I
know the feeling all 2 well. I wish you the best of luck
dizza |
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