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You were never there
Contributed by
Sophie_Taylor
on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 11:12:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You Were Never There,
You were never there
The last ten years
You were never there
When I flooded with tears
You were never there
When I was in a fight
You were never there
Day or night
You were never there
But were close by
You were never there
When I started to cry
Now it’s MY turn to be fair
When you have a problem
I WONT be there.
By Sophie Taylor
Copyright ©
Sophie_Taylor
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2004-08-27 23:12:13]
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Re: You were never there
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by TheRaven on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:50:09 AM AEST
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Lots of emotion behind the sophomoric word choice.
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Re: You were never there
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by AdamChantell on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:54:18 AM AEST
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| i hate when friends are not there for you, but when they need you.. they all of a sudden come out of the blue and talk to you. great write. |
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Re: You were never there
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:13:10 PM AEST
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so emotional great write
Lots of Love
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