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Your Decision
Contributed by
suzy
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Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I see the confusion dawn on your face
And I wish I could take away the pain
Gladly I would set myself in your place
Just to see you smiling once again
I will make mistakes along the way
But I will never break your heart
With your feelings I will never play
And girl there’s nothing that can tear us apart
I want to build your dreams with my own hands
And hold you in my arms every single night
Keep you safe and secure if only given a chance
Once we’re together I’ll not let you far from sight
I want to make you the happiest woman alive today
And I promise that this love I have is the forever kind
I just wanted you to know that it’s your decision to make
But I would do anything you wanted me to just say you’re mine
Copyright ©
suzy
... [
2002-11-03 23:00:00]
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Re: Your Decision
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 11:27:39 PM AEST
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| Thats just beautiful Suzy...Great write! Larry :o) |
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Re: Your Decision
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 12:43:41 AM AEST
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Hi Lasca. I hope things are a bit better for you. This is a lovely write... Maybe you should consider what this person said to you...
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: Your Decision
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by Kirby on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 05:23:49 PM AEST
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| From the sigh at the end of the comment I take it you are not with this guy anymore. I feel terribly sorry. This was a great poem. I wish u all the stars at night to make you smile. |
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