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The Core
Contributed by
sharif
on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 09:22:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Tortured souls tapping on fishbowls
living lives of regret
Lives above means and extravagant things
hoping the moping forget.
Silver chills and demoralized ills
watching silence stand in the corner
The crazies are yelling
the souless are jelling
the story too compelling to tell.
The senses have shifted
the spirits need lifted
by masses
that can't hold their heads
A whisper in distance
of subtle resistance
a chaotic slap in the face.
As objects crawl nearer
the flames of our fear
burn the casual tear
and stand up
to wait for the rain.
Will the dance be done?
Will the war be won?
Will the red fear have its way once more?
The longer I live
The stronger I give
Till at last I reach the core
Copyright ©
sharif
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2004-08-27 21:22:06]
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Re: The Core
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:43:46 AM AEST
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i don't really do rhyming poetry. but i did like this, especially these lines.
a chaotic slap in the face.
As objects crawl nearer
the flames of our fear
burn the casual tear
and stand up
to wait for the rain.
Very good write.
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Re: The Core
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by monophobic on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:39:23 PM AEST
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| i loove the way this poem flows, one of the better poems i've read in awhile! keep up the good work |
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Re: The Core
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by Adam_me2 on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:51:07 PM AEST
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you have a good beat going in this write. great write
Will the dance be done?
Will the war be won?
.. brillient |
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Re: The Core
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by BEE on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 12:42:32 AM AEST
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I like this poem very strong and out there
PS GET AT MY POEMS PLEASE |
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