Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 22-November 05:17:25 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Swept Away

Contributed by longforgottenlove on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 06:26:47 PM in AEST
Topic: poets



The challenge like a crashing wave
Catches you when you least expect
Knocks you straight to the ground
The under tow sucks you below
Low tide passes and high tide comes
Beaching you back to this reality
Stained and broken you continue on
Protecting only those around you
Selfishness is an unknown feeling
You throw yourself in harm's way
Like a pawn in the game of chess
First to go and first to die
Going forgotten for so long
Another storm comes and you are remembered
Only to be forgotten once again
History has proven to repeat itself
High tide sweeps you out to sea
Only to spit you back onto land
Day after day there you lay
Waiting to be comsumed once again
The twinkle in your eye grows dim
You say you can't take another day
But there again you lay
Waiting to be swept to sea
What if the tide suddenly stopped
Would you lay there for death
Would you find your inner strength
To stand and walk away on your own
Without the crutches given to you
The support of those around you
Could you give it all up
Step out of the chair and walk away
Give it all up for one
The one swept away everyday
Enveloped in your sea of tranquility
The one who finds peace in your pain
Swept away everyday only to return
To the same spot of vulnerability
Open arms welcome the pain
And you search for a source to blame
Underneath all of this mess
Lies the source of the pain
The one who allows themself
To be swept further and further away
Until land is no longer visible
Until all hope is lost
You'll then give up the battle
And drown in your sea of despair




Copyright © longforgottenlove ... [ 2004-08-27 18:26:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Swept Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 08:49:35 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
excellent write. some things change and some things never do.


Re: Swept Away (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:38:03 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Great job keep them comming love the way you write
God Bless Freespirit


Re: Swept Away (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:05:59 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Excellent write... U have swept me away with ur style of writing... love it keep em coming...
~Donna~




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com