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The great white boar
Contributed by
artostuff
on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 04:59:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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The
great
white boar
conducted a tiring
chase to a red herring, I
drank its blood, sweet as scarlet,
sweet as revenge,with a bitter
tang, my mistake, its was
the eye of newt, poor
fellow, I'll see him
tomorrow, no
doudt so
will he
.
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artostuff
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2004-08-27 16:59:07]
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Re: The great white boar
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 05:42:01 PM AEST
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| Your poem is beautiful! I love the way you wrote it and the way you wrote it gave me a perfect image in my head. Its really good and I also like the shape you wrote your poem in! You are such a great writer, I will definatley be looking forward to more poems of yours! |
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Re: The great white boar
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by 01_zanzebar on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:24:25 PM AEST
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another good write sir, hardy applause and congrats, I too like poems that have been structured that way, unfortunatly this site automatically centers everything, good olde GT.com allowed u to set poems out how u liked, (i did many a time) my best was a poem about been instigated by a boys farthers racism in the family (based on american history X) and it was in the shape of a swastica, it got excelent reveiws too lol
once agen, ace write, keep on with the work
well done
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