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Death Blooms
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:31:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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death blooms
apon my skin
slowly bubbleing out
then trickleing down my arm
as i move the blade
in see-saw formation
forming shapes on my arm
forming red spilling words
with crazy eyes
i glance about
this empty bathroom
where i hide my death soul in
i cant feel the blade move up my arm
higher up to my shoulder
stab it in deep
the blood gushs out
today feels right
for this careless suicide
dip my finger in the blood
and write out my sorrows
on mirrors
on doors
untill i run out of space
and colapse to the floor
where death still blooms
apon my skin
the message replays this:
"I Died For Sin"
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-08-27 13:31:05]
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Re: Death Blooms
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:12:21 PM AEST
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| I'm not sure exactly this was about, but i liked it. i usually don't read suicide poetry, but you had a catchy name. and true to that you didn't disappoint. keep up the good work. |
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Re: Death Blooms
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 07:11:21 PM AEST
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oooh. haunting suff.. i really like your style though...
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Re: Death Blooms
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 11:16:58 PM AEST
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| powerful and hard hitting write. |
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