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Left to dream
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
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Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 03:41:03 AM in AEST
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Looking out side the window
The snowflakes fall so freely
Thinking I could fall as freely as them
But not floating gracefully to the ground
Not laying my head peacefully down
Making my mark upon the pavement
The refined snowflakes cover me up
Like a mother protecting her child
From the horrors of the world
Masking me and my failure
Like the leaves on the steel traps
Waiting to catch that un-suspecting fox
The insane and inane grin
Still plastered on my face
Scaring passer-bys
As they see my meaningless joy and cold eyes
The snowflakes still float freely outside the window
I’m still thinking I could fly like them
You’re presence brings me out of my reverie
I am left to hope only dreams
Left to dream anything but reality
And perhaps what could be
And what could have been
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blueeyedevil13
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2004-08-27 03:41:03]
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Re: Left to dream
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by AspenGlow on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 03:56:15 AM AEST
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Such sweet snowflakes surely don't fall.....but with each one falling a step to take.....like the sweetness of dreaming to go to the source. To read these words and see that heart, inspiration sweet from the start.
Thank you for sharing this, its beautiful.
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Re: Left to dream
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by artostuff on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 05:19:30 AM AEST
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| A wonderfull read. I like the imagery. Thankyou for sharing. |
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Re: Left to dream
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by critterhideaway on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 06:33:46 AM AEST
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| Beautiful , What could have been, only a dream. How nicely written |
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Re: Left to dream
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by purplestary on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 06:59:01 AM AEST
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awsome poem, the imagry was great!
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Re: Left to dream
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 07:44:03 AM AEST
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Beautiful imagary in this poem, I was spell bound till the end, thank you for sharing.
Take Care Always
Kindragon |
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Re: Left to dream
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by brew on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:54:04 PM AEST
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| Deams are like falling snowflakes.....you find one that makes you smile.and you wanna keep that flake forever, but you do know one day it will be gone....but not from the one who really wanted it! Beautiful and creative write! |
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Re: Left to dream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 05:46:50 PM AEST
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| Your poem is fantastic! I can relate completely to what to you are talking about! I love the language you used and the verses and everything about it! Your poem expresses exactley what I feel like at times! Please keep writing! |
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