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Epilogue
Contributed by
MomentInTime
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Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:47:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Epilogue
I felt the turning of the tide; it’s true
I felt the distance ‘tween us grow
and watched it fill with many doubts
of what I thought I did not know;
and yet, throughout the time we’ve shared
I’ve always held you near:
‘twas you my eyes did feast upon,
‘twas you my heart held dear,
but as I turn this one last page to close
this tale of you and I, by far so sweet,
by far too short, and as I feel
by far not yet complete,
the story-line revealed a twist
which left within me now a feeling
that what I was I was so good,
but only for the time being.
G.B.A. 16 Oct 2002
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Re: Epilogue
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by pvd on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 06:58:38 AM AEST
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Fitting title for a tombstone of a dead romance. Good writing.
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Re: Epilogue
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 11:26:53 AM AEST
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Don't you just it when that happens?????????? I enjoyed this. Written with emotion, but not overpowering to where it became cheezie.
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Re: Epilogue
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by rookiepoet on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 10:38:42 PM AEST
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| A bitter sweet way to describe the end of a relationship. So many poems are about the pain and anguish of a lost love, I like the quiet sincerity of this one. Good stuff! |
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Re: Epilogue
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 11:26:39 AM AEST
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I like your approach with this.... it is "not yet complete" but part of something that continues on... as are the tides of the sea, the pages of a book.
I agree with the previous comment. There is quiet sincerity here... and I think, great insight. Wonderfully done!
Lost in thoughts of the something more,
SNM |
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