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Than Words Can Say
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:37:10 PM in AEST
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I love you more
Than words can say
I'll love you more
Each passing day
I'll wait for you
'Till to the ground
The sun has come
A-tumbling down
For now and always
In my heart
I pray to God
We'll never part
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2004-08-26 21:37:10]
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Re: Than Words Can Say
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 10:19:33 PM AEST
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aww thats sweet
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Than Words Can Say
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by MomentInTime on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:23:50 AM AEST
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cute as well....
Jordan
PS. good luck! |
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Re: Than Words Can Say
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:25:21 PM AEST
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a-tumbling??? what, have you forgotten proper grammaer? *sigh*
I guess love has turned you into a country bumpkin.
Em |
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Re: Than Words Can Say
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:11:27 PM AEST
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To pray is to desire with you heart, to desire to the One who holds the future, so naturally, I liked that part about prayer best....I hope it's not cliched, but an actual daily prayer of yours. God bless, my Love,
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Than Words Can Say
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 03:22:04 PM AEST
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you expressed yourself beautifully in this poem/prayer very well written.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Than Words Can Say
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by anitajames on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:36:04 AM AEST
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| Short, sweet, and spiritual. I loved it. |
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Re: Than Words Can Say
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:25:50 AM AEST
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Expressed so deeply and so well. I wish u all the best David. For u have a genuine heart that's true.
*hugs*
Sue |
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Re: Than Words Can Say
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by Archie on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 01:31:07 PM AEST
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This poem reminds me of a few songs of which i will quote 1;
"Words when kindly spoken
can make dreams seem true
but more than words can say
are the little things you do"
From "The little things you do" by Sam Cooke
The words to many of youe poems can easily be converted to song. I am greatly humbled and inspired to read what you write. |
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Re: Than Words Can Say
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by mylady on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:11:21 PM AEST
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| Very nice poem .....mylady |
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