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Come Back To Me
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:30:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This new-found light
Has gone away
I'm drowned in night
In midst of day
Come back to me
Come back and stay
Come set me free
Come light my way
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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2004-08-26 21:30:26]
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Re: Come Back To Me
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by rookiepoet on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:44:29 PM AEST
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| Short but sweet, sometimes those are the best ones. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Come Back To Me
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:23:48 PM AEST
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enough for her to melt into your arms again....
no matter how much cheese it may contain...
Just kidding. Nice write...
I think.
Your loving adopted sister in Christ,
Em |
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Re: Come Back To Me
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:08:41 PM AEST
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"I'm melting...." (Wizard of Oz)
Actually, I liked the last 2 lines of the first stanza. They were very nice. Am I really that bright? (or should I say vibrant, Andrew?) So, I think I like you....,
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Come Back To Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 03:33:49 PM AEST
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you are very good at condensing your words, but not your feelings, which is i suppose how we all should be. once again a very good write.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Come Back To Me
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by anitajames on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:37:07 AM AEST
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| I feel the same way about my husband. Good job. |
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Re: Come Back To Me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:22:28 AM AEST
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Short and sweet. I hope she's back into ur life. May ur heart be blessed with the best kind of love dearest David.
*hugs*
Sue |
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