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Fantasy

Contributed by TiNyOnE on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I swore this wouldnt happen not this time.
this feeling took over my body once more
i promised myself i'd try as hard as i could
not to fall into a fantasy world again
you swept me off my feet like you've done before
you stared in my eyes like time never past.
my heart beated faster and i had butterflies in my stomach
once more i was falling in love with the enemy
everyone told me you'd brake my heart
that i was going to hurt like i'd never hurt again
I took a whole year to finally get over the brake up
and as long as that took is how quickly i fell in your sweet embrace
you told me you'd never leave
never hurt me like you had done.
I honestly thought things would be different
here i am once more wondering how i ended up back in the begining
you lied and hurt me which i didnt think you could do again
why did you?
i loved you and risked everything to be with you
you kissed me like no one ever did.
passiontely i really thought you'd be my one
my soul mate
i connected with you like i never had before
and now im back where i started trying to get over the brake up
asking my self why i put my self back here.
for the last time i'd put up with your lies that i believed so foolishly
i learned my lesson, and although im here alone
its better than to be living in make believe
in a land that doesnt exisit. In a fantasy

Copyright Â© TiNyOnE ... [ 2002-11-03 17:00:00]
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Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 05:05:09 PM AEST
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Oh i know this feeling
all to well, Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

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