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boredom
Contributed by
co_cane13
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Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 07:26:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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its a feeling of agony, unrest
where your mind just sits and festers
aging as each second pass
watching the image your own shadow cast
cast upon the empty floor
sitting there expecting it to do more
something exciting, something entertaining
and as you sit there waiting
you realize it is a reflection of yourself
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2004-08-26 19:26:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: boredom
(User Rating: 1 ) by taintedorange21 on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 07:47:30 PM AEST (User
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so true.. |
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Re: boredom
(User Rating: 1 ) by buchi on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 04:13:02 PM AEST (User
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Your poem is giving ideal voices to the varied sounds of the coming tempest...so well done.. |
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Re: boredom
(User Rating: 1 ) by oxluvlaughingxo on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:49:02 PM AEST (User
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Very true, very good. |
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