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Our place

Contributed by TiNyOnE on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 04:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I went back to that place today where we first met
as i sat and looked up at the moon
i remembered thoses feelings i felt
how i thought you'd never leave
how amazing your kisses were
i lost my heart to you, you took it as you broke it only leaving me half
The place we fell in love is the place i shattered most tears
you were the air i need to breathe and without you i felt like i was suffercating
but time never healed my broken heart
everyone said it would but it never did
any realtionship that i ever had after ours failed because i was afraid of comitting
afraid of ever giving what was left of my heart out.
I dont want to love anyone else because im still loving you
thinking your still loveing me
i come back to this place hopeing to find you here
waiting for you to embrace me with your loving arms
i went back to that place today where we first met
i looked up at the moon and remensiced over feeling once felt
how amazing you made me feel and then i realized how terrible i felt when you left
i lost my heart to you
you took it as you broke it only leaving me half
the place we fell in love is the place i shattered most tears
i sit here waiting for you to return back to me and make my heart whole once again.

Copyright © TiNyOnE ... [ 2002-11-03 16:30:00]
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Re: Our place (User Rating: 1 )
by spaceotter on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 06:26:38 PM AEST
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Nice write. I understand.:)

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