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Reminder of a lost today
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 06:49:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Dark sky sipped light from the moon
Photograph in hand he stood, silent silhouette by the bay
The heat of summer night could not pierce the chill of his heart
The blanket of despair still covering his mind
Hours had raced as he wandered by the shore
As day turned to dusk, dreams turned to dust
Bound by pride he had let her walk away
Tormenting minutes ticked, kicks hard to the soul
Was a fool made in the silence ?, the words it replaced
I love you perhaps too big a step, a vulnerable leap
Doubt stole victory, opportunity wilted to a kiss
Was this the end of hope ?, was it never to awake ?
Decision stirred the troubled heart
On her wings he raced,took flight
To another flight only minutes away
One way this night would last for eternity
Gate 42 lay empty, except for a broken heart
Too late to realise what should have been
Each tomorrow would always be a photograph
A reminder of a lost today.
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Re: Reminder of a lost today
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 10:10:33 PM AEST
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Steve, this is so beautiful altho it is so sad.....
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Re: Reminder of a lost today
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by brew on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:57:11 PM AEST
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| Yes.......a beautiful, yet soul saddened write.! |
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Re: Reminder of a lost today
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:31:01 PM AEST
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How beautifully written that was wonderful
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Reminder of a lost today
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:26:51 AM AEST
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Oh My Steve, this is so sad, and regretful! How many times we turn around and find they are gone.........why did we let them go?
Lament the time and the hour......but they are gone now for all etenity!
Very deep feelings for me, and I know for you!
Wish we could turn the clock back and relive moments.......too late.........all gone!
Poetic hugs to console your sadness
consue |
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Re: Reminder of a lost today
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:25:28 PM AEST
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What a heartbreaking poem!....
Doubt stole victory, opportunity wilted to a kiss
Beautifully written.
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Re: Reminder of a lost today
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by arden on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:10:25 AM AEST
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Steve, i have yet to read much of your poetry. but what i have read has simply awe struck me. your words are powerful and yet graceful. so poetic and emotional. i am already a great fan of your writes.
this was so beautifully sad. i'm afraid i am at a loss for words.
i loved this. you have such an amazing talent.
keep it up.
Becky |
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Re: Reminder of a lost today
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:29:57 AM AEST
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Very deep stuff here but great thinking!
good work!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Reminder of a lost today
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 03:12:22 AM AEST
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Gosh... this tugs at my heart. It is impossible to know, of course, what would have happened if the moment had been different. Many of us know... how impossibly hard that is to live with sometimes.
I am just discoverying your work... but I am drawn in. I will be reading more...
Well done!
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Re: Reminder of a lost today
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by KaylaNoelHohn on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 03:46:33 PM AEST
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The way you write is amazing to me.. IYour emotion is so intense..I Enjoy just about everything i have read of yours.. We have diffrent styles of writing, but i adore yours.. thanks for sharing them..
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