|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Natures sorrow
Contributed by
artostuff
on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:19:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
stand Near this suburban
glare, cacooned from natures
sorrow, clumped together
as wild briar to grow and
fester without a care, climb
the stairs to there haven,
can they fathom our despair
as we wither with the season.
Copyright ©
artostuff
... [
2004-08-26 15:19:35]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Natures sorrow
(User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFey on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:31:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I am sure that this piece has a very personal meaning to you, and the reason I liked it so well is that it can be interpeted by the reader in a number of ways. Great write!! DarkFey |
|
|
Re: Natures sorrow
(User Rating: 1 )
by girltranscended on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:01:57 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very interesting write..."suburban glare" and the thought of "fester(ing) without a care" are so dead-on it's amazing. Nice job! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
