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Break in two for you
Contributed by
majesticpoet
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Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:18:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Oh, Why cant I be what you need?
A new improved version of me
But I'm nothing so good
No, Im nothing..
just bones
A lonely ghost burning down songs
of violence, of love, and of sorrow
How I beg for just one more tomorrow!
Where youd hold me down, fold me in
deep into the heart of your sins
I'd break in two over you, where every piece of me dies
and only you can give the breath of life!
But you dont see me,
Here i'm pinned down between darkness and light
bleached and blinded
by these lonely nights
I'd break in two for you
over you I could bend in two
now you see me, now you dont
now I need you, now you dont!
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Re: Break in two for you
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by frozenfire on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:23:09 PM AEST
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| wonderfully done!! I applaud you...I could have never expressed such a feeling as you did with so few words. Excellent work! |
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Re: Break in two for you
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by frozenfire on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:23:15 PM AEST
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| wonderfully done!! I applaud you...I could have never expressed such a feeling as you did with so few words. Excellent work! |
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Re: Break in two for you
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by MajesticPoet on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:25:15 PM AEST
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Thanks for the comment. I am glad you liked it. I have more coming. Been in hibernation for the last few months, so as you can imagine, I have many of them to post :D
MaJ |
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Re: Break in two for you
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 05:12:56 PM AEST
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Well written Maj. Can't wait to see what else followed you out of hibernation !!!
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Break in two for you
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 11:37:23 PM AEST
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this is excellent....this is such a heart felt poem for me...thanx for sharing...awesome job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Break in two for you
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by jakromm on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:48:23 PM AEST
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Ya, this is definatly good.... good song lyrics that is
From Autumn To Ashes - Autumns Monologue
YOU ARE SO TALENTED! |
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