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Crying Out to Silence
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:11:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This heart will shatter
The pieces then lost
My eyes will be swollen
I will cry out to silence
And get no answers
To hear a voice
To see a face
A second of comfort
To know I’m not alone
In this world
That shows me no interest
With these people that just cause problems
In a life worth not living
I sit alone on a couch
Finally able to cry
No one to cry out to
No one to speak to
Just a bunch of silence
Only me crying
Into the cushions
Alone
In pain
With no help
Copyright ©
pyrofungus
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2004-08-26 14:11:18]
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Re: Crying Out to Silence
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by MajesticPoet on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:23:59 PM AEST
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Very nice one. I think you show how we all feel at times. Keep up the good work and life gets eaiser.,.
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Re: Crying Out to Silence
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 06:59:00 PM AEST
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dammit! we're a like!
i remeber the last time that happened to me. it was only a few weeks ago. my mum iggnored me and i just feel apart...
then after around an hour she finally told me to go bed and so i yelled at her to lave me alone so she went off to bed. leaving me in the silence down stairs. the voices clung to me and i broke really, really bad. no night could have been worse... |
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Re: Crying Out to Silence
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by Heartfilledblood on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 08:14:56 PM AEST
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This is real sad. If you ever need somsone to talk to remember im just a messege away. Messege me anytime :)
Great write :)
Heartfilledblood |
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Re: Crying Out to Silence
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by Bruce on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:05:25 AM AEST
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| i cannot tell you what to write, and you do write well, but try writting happiness instaed of sadness. i am sure you will feel a lot better, as well. sorry, if my comment upsets you but i try to write love and happiness, unless i am forced into a sad situation. xxx |
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Re: Crying Out to Silence
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by lanna047 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:11:05 AM AEST
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| so sad, and your words speak such volumes ... don't ever give up, you are being heard |
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Re: Crying Out to Silence
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 04:49:12 AM AEST
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you put a new meaning to emotions with this poem pyro.
I so drwn in, and bought so many memories forth, some I buried deep.
this was a very toughing poem.
Beautifully written.
Take Care always
Kindragon |
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Re: Crying Out to Silence
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 05:33:21 PM AEST
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Summer, just reading your comments, I know that there are enough people that care abouit you here at this site. Your cry, no matter how silent it was, has been heard. I do hope and pray that you'll find comfort.
Take care, my friend.
David |
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Re: Crying Out to Silence
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by xemptydecemberx on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:56:20 PM AEST
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great write.. incredible...love it
-x |
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