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Dusk
Contributed by
pvd
on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 12:20:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Without
direct
sunlight
to cast
shadows,
the form
and
essence
of an
object
become
one.
Copyright ©
pvd
... [
2004-08-26 12:20:29]
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Re: Dusk
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by DarkFey on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:23:14 PM AEST
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| great lil write, I love the way you have left it open to interpet as you like. At least thats the way I saw it. I could just see my self setting there looking at an object and having this thought. Good job! DarkFey |
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Re: Dusk
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by pixie on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:42:34 PM AEST
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short and sweet :) good write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Dusk
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by df on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 08:05:06 PM AEST
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Hello pvd,
I am left thinking that, as the implication goes,
on sunny days form and essence separate as object and shadow. Yikes! I've no desire to disembody my essence...
Thank goodness for # 45 sunblock!
thanks for your write pvd,
df |
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Re: Dusk
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by df on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 08:08:11 PM AEST
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ps...
sorry pvd, forgot to say how the title is perfect. makes whole the write...
ty
df |
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