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Following The Invisible To An Unknown Place
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 11:39:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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youre in the same spot you were last year
you realize you are still lost
its sad you choose to stay in that spot
and stare blankly back at us
in darkened corners you stand alone
you look at life as you are blind
youve walked past people and times
but they dont matter, you left them behind
the ones youve hurt along the way
have gotten back up and walked
but you choose to stay hurt the way you are
and let your demons keep you stalked
you try to lock memories in your closet
and shove the pains under your bed
but no matter how hard you try
they can never leave your head
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2004-08-26 11:39:06]
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Re: Following The Invisible To An Unknown Place
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by frozenfire on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:19:55 PM AEST
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| what a dark poem...very nicely done. It reminded me of myself..nice work!! |
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Re: Following The Invisible To An Unknown Place
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by frozenfire on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:20:06 PM AEST
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| what a dark poem...very nicely done. It reminded me of myself..nice work!! |
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Re: Following The Invisible To An Unknown Place
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by frozenfire on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:20:26 PM AEST
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| what a dark poem...very nicely done. It reminded me of myself..nice work!! |
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Re: Following The Invisible To An Unknown Place
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:54:46 AM AEST
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Very dark. It was like it was written about me.
I love it.
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Re: Following The Invisible To An Unknown Place
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by buchi on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 08:54:28 PM AEST
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| oem embodies a great degree of the most elevated species of poetical merit |
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