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Is It Real?
Contributed by
x-dying-ragdoll-x
on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:31:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the force is pulling
me to your arms
hoping when i get there
I'll have no harm
but can the force
be strong enough
to smooth our way
when it gets rough
will we be able
to make it through
can you tell me now
if this is true?
will you part from me
at the first little fight
or will you stay
throughout the night
what will you do
to be with me
will you turn and run
or stay and plee
these are the things
I need to know
cuz if this is nothing
then I'll just go
so hold me tight
and tell me the truth
is this worth it
or is it no use
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x-dying-ragdoll-x
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2004-08-25 16:31:34]
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Re: Is It Real?
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by DarkFey on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:40:36 PM AEST
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| Great write, you just wrote the million dollar question and wrote it well! And yes I would consider this a love poem. Good job, really enjoyed it! DarkFey |
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Re: Is It Real?
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 12:57:01 PM AEST
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I liked this poem... Great job
Take care
Christina |
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