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Flames Of Passion
Contributed by
Opium
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Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Can't bear the sun and all its lights
I hate this world and all its fights
Lived my bitter life with nothing to acquire
Time to set this bloody world on fire
Blackness is life and life I hate
In this twisted game that you call fate
I will break thy rules and curse them forever
On your holy ground I shall never stand ...ever
And Evil's path I will choose
I need no more life, no more love to loose
Fire will devour your bliss and grace
And sends flames high to the space
I shall hide your ashes deep in the ground
And pray that a new rose will rise and my heaven bound
To this new beauty my life i devote
For she is Eden and new hope she brought
But your thorns will soon harm me my fairest flower
And my dreams will drift and slowly goes
But in my flames you shall burn my sweet little rose.
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2002-11-03 10:00:00]
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Re: Flames Of Passion
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by OreO on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 12:00:10 PM AEST
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This is so sad
Beautiful write
I really enjoyed this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Flames Of Passion
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by gina on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 10:48:02 PM AEST
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that was very sad, i liked it coz i felt with u the pain.......keep up the gr8 write.
btw i think there is a (*) :) u know what i mean :) |
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Re: Flames Of Passion
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 11:55:22 PM AEST
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| Powerful!! I have a weakness for dark poetry...and this one was great! Well done! Larry :o) |
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