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~Love Not~
Contributed by
LoelIntrepid
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:26:24 PM in AEST
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~Love not this world I am in, love not of who I am, love not tha glare you give, love not these feelings I bare within, love not of this pain I show, love not tha fact my soul shall never grow, love not these days that pass, love not this faded laugh, love not these tears that fall, love not that I am no longer strong, love not these fears which are reborn, love not that I am unable to see what this life is for, love not of how my heart aches, love not of these endless mistakes, love not tha breath I do take, love not that my hope was missplaced, love not of fates misguiding path, love not of all that I see, love not of this darkened dream~
~Of this world I am in I soon lose all of who I am when you give upon me your glare what I feel I can not bare though you can not see this pain I try to show and by this my soul can not grow from these days that pass can you not hear my faded laugh hiding these tears like a mask while my fears relapse knowing not of what this life is for this is of my greatest mistake with each breath I take for my hope was misplaced feeling as though I will not last fates path for all that I see is that of a darkened dream~
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Re: ~Love Not~
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by DarkFey on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:38:46 PM AEST
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| WOW powerful write, love does sometimes suck the life out of us. Great write the emotions displayed were very strong, good job! DarkFey |
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Re: ~Love Not~
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 08:21:32 PM AEST
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| very good write. =] |
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Re: ~Love Not~
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:28:06 PM AEST
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haunting.......... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: ~Love Not~
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by Loellntrepid on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 01:56:17 AM AEST
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| ~So judge me not through my words for they are born from a heart left unforged~ |
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