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In My Eyes
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:43:24 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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In my eyes are the windows,
That is where you’ll see my soul,
Do you like what you can see?
Is it pure what is inside of me.
My eyes can cry a thousand tears,
Be the release of all my fears,
Show you when I am feeling pain,
My tears fall like little drops of rain.
Look deep into my blue door ways,
You will witness the price I pay,
All the tears turn into floods,
My veins are dry, gone has all the blood.
Like shattered mirrors looking out,
Awash with tears & engulfed in doubt,
My soul beneath is in no better state,
Now it will ,it must suffer it’s fate.
Take a good look into my eyes,
There are as lost as the night skies,
Blue is the colour of my mirrors,
Cold as marble without a glimmer.
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pixie
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Re: In My Eyes
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:48:03 PM AEST
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Wow.......I don't know what to say...I'm speechless...that's of course a good thing...I can see all of this happening...i can see it happening in us all...
please comment on my work too
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Re: In My Eyes
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by DarkFey on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:23:16 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write in its misery and wistfullness. You have a great talent at writing powerfully about emotion. Loved this and felt it, also read your profile you got me beat only 3 piercings and 4 tattoos, cheers!! DarkFey |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:16:19 PM AEST
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*throws a warming pad around that marble and starts taping up the shattered mirror of your soul*
Did you smile?? It was worth a try... I found that to heal my soul I had to mix the salty physical tears with the tears of my soul... and everything had to come out...
Depression is the result of poison.... poison to our souls.... and just as real poison has to be washed out of our body, spiritual poison has to be washed out of our soul....
I'm here if you need me, Pix....
Jaime |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 09:10:33 PM AEST
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| brilliant write filled with an enormous amount of emotion. |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:52:22 PM AEST
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Pixie A wonderful write may you find an innner light to shine so bright inside of you.
Sending you lots of love
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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