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Acid to the Free Flow
Contributed by
norticus
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Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A time; A lonley time; filled with nothing.
Every day I was sad.
Never knowing; just kept going
Too numb to be mad.
Then there was you
A time; Exciting anticipation with every date
Every day there was love
Life was wild; like the flow of the Nile
Like a blessing from above
Then we did it
Warmth; A hot sweaty euphoric warmth inside and out
Each moment was forever
We were one; a lot of fun
Enveloped in pleasure
I professed my love
Fear; Deap seated fear from the last time with that other one
Acid to the free flow
Your hair was stunning; as I saw you running
You were running from me though
Then I put on my sweater
Warm; Comfortably warm on a cool fall day
The scented candles burning
Deeply relaxed; it's nice to be back
At least I'm learning.
jz
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2002-11-03 09:30:00]
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Re: Acid to the Free Flow
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 11:48:17 AM AEST
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This was definately different
I really enjoyed reading this
Very beautiful write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Acid to the Free Flow
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 01:13:30 PM AEST
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Dear Norticus @-<-<<-
An excellent and beautiful write.. you have captured the words and made them feelings with a life of their own..
always Nessa |
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