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Do You Understand My Love
Contributed by
PoetryZ
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:26:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It’s hard to tell you that I love you
Because I don’t know how you will feel
I ache all over with pain because you don’t know this
I am not ashamed of my love for you
But I can tell you these things like a man
As I look into your eyes, your eyes begin to capture my soul
I dream to hold you in my arms because I know that I would be complete
I think of you all the time because you are the one that I love
My heart throbs with pain when I am away from you
I wish we could fly away to the vast blue sky
Like to love birds showing their love for each other
I don’t know if I can keep my feelings to myself any longer
They’re eating me up inside
I hope we can share both of our feelings
In my mind I think of kissing you
But before I realize it my lips are already touching yours
As my lips were locked with yours my love was lost
My feelings were lost to, and did not even know what was happening
From this kiss of ours
You will know that I love you
But I was too bashful to admit it
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Re: Do You Understand My Love
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:34:53 PM AEST
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beautiful!
Love is a beautiful thing...it captures your soul and your heart...you can feel it running through your body...its an amazing feeling...
please comment on my work too
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Re: Do You Understand My Love
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by Dragontear27 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:36:50 PM AEST
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very good poem trust me i've been there and still am. But you gatta go for it man!!! I just went through a break up and it sucked but i relised if we were ment to be then it would have hapened so if you two were ment to be then all the better. Thats why ya gots ta go for the gold (if you know what i mean) Good luck man and awsome poem!
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Re: Do You Understand My Love
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by Scorpio_Sin on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 09:07:39 PM AEST
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PoetryZ,
I really enjoyed your poem, I am a female, but I know how you feel. You're not alone, you have to just come out and say it, little do you know, she may feel the same...
Wonderful Poem, and please read mine also.
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