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Heat Wave
Contributed by
pvd
on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 11:49:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Looking for relief,
I sat on the fire
escape, sweating out
the eighty five plus
degrees of the muggy,
July night.
I watched the gibbous
moon rise, it hung above
the horizon, a big,
juicy slice of orange
over the skyline.
I wanted to reach out,
bite into it and quench
my thirst.
Copyright ©
pvd
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2004-08-25 11:49:14]
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Re: Heat Wave
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:44:15 PM AEST
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This one comes with a serious visual... even without the detail... and says a lot with few words. It's striking, really.
By the way.... I think a lot of us want to do that. Few, though, know it's possible and fewer still, ever do.
Maybe it's just the inclusion of "I"... but this one... tugs at me.
SNM
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Re: Heat Wave
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:56:13 PM AEST
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your vocabulary rocks my world...so does this poem..sounds like New York...fire escapes and heat...
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