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Lil Dada
Contributed by
rebelshorty0418
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:45:18 AM in AEST
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Lil~DaDa
ur one of a kind
never affaid to speak ur mind
u stick up for urself even when u know u cant win
bad things would happen but always u would grin
ur only five years old
but ur always so bold
when everybody turned their back on me
u were there to make me see
i could make it thru
with anythin i'd do
ur a brave young soldier
fightin for his life
and im here for u thru all the strife
i'd do anythin to make the pain go away
i'd give my own life just to see u live another day
the doctor gave u a 50% chance to live
and here some advice i'd like to give
just when u think u cant make it thru
look to the sky get a clear view
rememeber daddy's lookin down thru that lil cloud
so pull thru lil soldier let's make daddy proud
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Re: Lil Dada
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:56:53 AM AEST
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Very sad but I believe in miracles.
Greatly written.
faith, hope,peace, joy, huggs,
emy
many prayers |
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Re: Lil Dada
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by skyblumoon on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:19:10 AM AEST
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Very emotinal and touching. It brought tears to my eyes. You're both in my thoughts and prayers.
Blu |
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