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Full Circle
Contributed by
Lia
on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:50:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Dewdrops shined liked diamonds
Beneath an ogre of a tree
Not one parting word was spoken
From the fading red outline of her lips
The air was calm but reeked a stench
Of madness, gloom and hate
A colored blue contact lens
Lay curled and dry upon her pale cheek
Her hair once was butterscotch
Now a stained nest of crimson
A broken heel lay by her hip
A bare foot testing the bitter breeze
Somewhere beneath her lay one hand
Tightly fisted the other above her head
When they took her away on a white wheeled bed
They covered her beaten face with a sheet
The wheels stumbled briefly upon some rocks
Which jumbled her hand just enough
From her hand dropped a note
This is what it said...
For better for worse I loved him
Honestly, completely right up to the end
From who I am, foregiveness I give
But even in death I will not forget
Where is he you can bet I'll be
Haunting the world all around him...
Copyright ©
Lia
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2004-08-25 03:50:50]
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Re: Full Circle
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by sunshiny on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:49:03 PM AEST
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| I love your originality. Revenge from a woman, even in death...I like how you can just imagine the story before. What has happened to this woman for her to feel this way. Thanks for the poem. I like poems I have to think about...Neat! |
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Re: Full Circle
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 04:45:06 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Full Circle
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 12:07:29 PM AEST
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This is an amazing write.......I was stopped dead in my tracks reading it, mesmerised from start to finish
Superb !!
Steve |
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