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Rev
Contributed by
artostuff
on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:13:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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fire Up the engines, old revs
spark to life, gunning to meet
the red line as a city soaked
in virgin blood, to see it pass
as young as day in these
fried dull veins.
Copyright ©
artostuff
... [
2004-08-25 03:13:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rev
(User Rating: 1 ) by MsScissors on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:59:38 AM AEST (User
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OOOOOOh yes.... I love it. the only thing is that I want you to keep going. good start! I want more... LEt it scream. |
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