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does my world finally have a light?
Contributed by
little_genna
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:00:53 AM in AEST
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A light in a world with no feeling,
The darkness in my heart,
How is this coming to being?
Is this my new start?
I start to have a weird sensation,
Who or what is this new thing,
I approach it with such caution,
So many questions need asking.
I embrace it. It feels good.
Making me so happy and smile,
Feeling completely understood.
Making my caution worthwhile.
Yet I’m still scared to go any further,
I have this feeling of love,
Yet I do not want to stay here neither,
My best mate believes I need a bit of a shove.
What do I have to lose?
Oh may be just a good friend,
This is something I do not want to abuse.
Though I could gain a boyfriend.
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Re: does my world finally have a light?
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 06:01:38 AM AEST
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Very good work here and I luv the title.
Awesome masterpeice of wonder,
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: does my world finally have a light?
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 09:45:17 AM AEST
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a truly great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: does my world finally have a light?
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by Snapz on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 11:12:24 AM AEST
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Am i so specail 2 u? Am i realy tht wonderful?
Erm................... i duno wot 2 say, for once im lost for words to coment on your poetry. love u huni love snapz xxxxxxxxx |
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